Mid Project Review
For my mid
project review, I was able to get some positive and also constructive feedback
from my group which I found very helpful. To deconstruct these points and see
how I can take and use them to my advantage, I’m going to pick them apart and
apply to areas that the group have stated I need to work on, but also what I
know myself still needs to be done.
1.
I have made clear connections with my visual
research but was told to try and narrow down my ideas. I agree with this to an
extent since my sketchbook seems a little more disorganised than usual. I think
this is due to needing some more connecting images
to previous work to make my progress clearer. This can be done by spending some time looking back through all of my work
and seeing where the influences came from ie. Drawings, artist research etc.
2.
I was told there is evidence of material
sampling with lots of variety; especially with yarns. I have looked at a lot of
possible warps to make a clear and thorough decision. To extend this, once my yarns have been dyed, I will need to create
another yarn wrap of my warp plan and show what the yarns are – I will
also document the yarns in my technical file.
3.
This question was not answered in the group
critique but I would still like to self asses it. I think my colour palette has
been established well but almost has two halves to it of autumnal colours and
bright colours. Finding the right balance of these colours to fit with what I
wanted took a bit of time but I now feel as though it has been defined well. I
have also tried lots of colour combinations that I can work with later on
within my weft.
4.
I have shown clear evidence of experimentation
in Photoshop that I should continue with. Perhaps it would be worth starting to
think about weft ideas from older drawings or
photographs. It was also suggested that I maybe work
outside of my sketchbook to continue drawing. I absolutely agree with
this since I would like to try to continue drawing
away from digital and go back to pen to paper.
5.
I have shown clear evidence of contextual research
through my mood board. I would like to expand on this and start to think more
about the options that are available on it eg. mens
suits, interiors, scarves. I need to find some artists
that are making the same sort of things that I imagine my work fitting into.
6.
For positive recommendations, it was suggested
that I make more links to my digital drawings
within my sketchbook. Again I completely agree since the connections in
my sketchbook are lacking and I need to clearly show where everything is coming
from.